
There were supposed to be dreams as blue
as her grandmother’s eyes
and skies and oceans and everything
opening up
that’s what her future had always told her
before
petals of innocence fell outside the window
sometimes
she trys to remember her grandmother
other times she trys
not to
A very poignant poem!
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Thank you…
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Wow, so thoughtful, and gets under the skin, made me think
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Thanks for commenting… good to hear
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Excellent piece.
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Good to hear… thank you:)
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Lord, have mercy, Kae, I did not discern the focus, the inspiration of this poem until I clicked “Like”. As I first read it, it described for me the sorrowing sentiment of anyone – any one of us – who, at a younger day and time had hopes for the future, which were dashed by life’s difficulties. That remains true for me. However, now knowing the heart of the poem beats with an indelible ache of those scarred by the cruelty of sex trafficking, the pain…my sympathetic pain is deepened. For this, I, though anguished, thank you.
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment Paul… very insightful!
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This is really moving and powerful! Quite well-written.
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Thank you:)… a true compliment coming from such a writer as yourself.
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